More...I am in the mood to be critical...:P
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Originally Posted by 1HotA32
here is a few more.
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I am a little off -put by the stars, because they are yellow. Also, the sky could be replaced with something more pleasant. The car is also centered in the frame. Remember the rule of 3rds.
The back of the car is cut off. the bridge looks saggy and should be straightened. Stop sign might be cloned out?
Probably my fav of the set...yellow behind it should be desaturated...the whole shot is almost too dark? the lights are distracting also...but I am not sure how one would fix it. rim...
Shot from the wrong angle, IMO. Rim turned.
Rim and Vignetting. Trash on the ground. Yellow elbow tube in the store window is distracting..desaturate or remove completely. Sky needs to be replaced
Rim, elbow tube, sky
Trash, yellow lights...Also I wouldnt mind seeing a horizontal version...try turning your camera to vertical some times...a good rule of thumb....try every shot with at least one vertical and one horizontal.