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1: The mood is great here and the coloration fits. I love how the treeline seems to mimic a windtunnel airstream!!
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2: Colors are great here too! The orange really pops! As a few have mentioned how the other orange -> red tones really make the car look at home in the shot. I however don't like the placement of the car. It is far too centered.
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3: Great car, but I don't feel there was any photographic effort here. Looks like a car sighting, shot with the handy P&S.
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4: Mood is great here! I feel that I am in a damp, dark environment when I see the image.
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5: This shot looks very amateur. There is a wild distortion on the front bumper and the post work is very noticeable. I can't help but point out that the sideways hourglass vignette looks very unrealistic and the composition doesn't suit the car; forced to the left of the frame. It makes the right half of the shot seem pointless. Rule of thirds would be much preferred here, there is no rule of halves.
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6: Composition is good here. I love the grain
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7: I find the lighting to be quite poor here. The left is too hot and the shadow too sharp. It doesn't please the eye. I don't find the composition at all interesting either.
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8: I think there was potential for a much better shot here. Maybe if we saw more of the distant cars in the mist and less of the fans on the left. Mood is great, still. I adore the reflections over the car body covered in raindrops!
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9: I'm not a fan of the extreme processing, so ill try to ignore that and otherwise critique. Showing the tread side of the tire really breaks the lines of the car, maybe take from the other side? I don't like the tilt you have on the shot from that angle, it seems like its trying too hard to frame the whole car. Maybe step back and include more background. I would suggest not center-weighting the car as well.
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10: I love the tone and the pure wall and car make great contrast to the dirty, distorted reflection in the ground. Centered subject is great when there is symmetry!
Please do not take offense to my comments if these are your photos. I only hope to give you direction to improve.
We all have room to improve!!! Thanks for posting!!
