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Old 11-18-2009, 01:15 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Contest Photo 2

Theme is "Beauty in the mundane"

The photo has to be of something very common and I guess ordinarily overlooked.

Wondering what you all thought of this photo as I'm thinking of possibly submitting it (the original is underneath it FYI).
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Old 11-18-2009, 11:42 AM   #2 (permalink)
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1 vote an no comments huh?
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Old 11-18-2009, 01:04 PM   #3 (permalink)
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yeah sorry. lol.

i really liked the concept. i like simple, and this is very much something i am drawn to, the only reason i didnt go 5 on it. is to me, imho, there is to much out of focus area, its stressful to look at almost.

i think maybe if you could crop out most of the bottom and just leave very little out of focus it would get it there.

actually the more i look at them the more i like the second one. the color anyway, feels warmer to me. just that out of focusness......

i hope this helps a little bit. again, i really like the concept and w/ a few changes DEF something i would hang on my wall.

same goes for the second. except on the left where it falls out of focus, i dunno, it seems unusally blurry, even for something out of focus, the line where its focused and unfocust is really harsh.
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Old 11-18-2009, 01:32 PM   #4 (permalink)
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yeah sorry. lol.

i really liked the concept. i like simple, and this is very much something i am drawn to, the only reason i didnt go 5 on it. is to me, imho, there is to much out of focus area, its stressful to look at almost.

i think maybe if you could crop out most of the bottom and just leave very little out of focus it would get it there.

actually the more i look at them the more i like the second one. the color anyway, feels warmer to me. just that out of focusness......

i hope this helps a little bit. again, i really like the concept and w/ a few changes DEF something i would hang on my wall.

same goes for the second. except on the left where it falls out of focus, i dunno, it seems unusally blurry, even for something out of focus, the line where its focused and unfocust is really harsh.
well its just bokeh from using my 50mm lens... you get lots of foreground/background blue with that sucker.

I'll play with some crops though, I see what you mean.

You liked the warmer color though? I kinda thought the b&w was a bit more crisp and clean looking.

how does this crop look?
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Old 11-18-2009, 01:52 PM   #5 (permalink)
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yeah, to me that is much nicer to look at.

i liked the warm, but i used to work in a restaraunt and the image of stacked plates reminded me of when they come fresh out of the dishwash and are nice and warm. i just associate it more with past experience i guess.
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Old 11-18-2009, 02:24 PM   #6 (permalink)
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cool thanx for the imput
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I like the second crop better, because of reasons FBG stated as well...I like the framing too...I personally like the cool colors because it is more sterile for me.
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Old 11-18-2009, 04:29 PM   #8 (permalink)
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I like the second crop better, because of reasons FBG stated as well...I like the framing too...I personally like the cool colors because it is more sterile for me.
LOL... strangely thats what I thought too!
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Old 11-18-2009, 05:09 PM   #9 (permalink)
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Second one is much better but for some reason I can't vote.
Guess i am not good enough which is probably true.
I am not a fan of the first one to much of it is out of focus in my opinion. Second one looks proportionally better.
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I think it sh ould have been stepped back a little bit...it feels really cramped and crowded with the plates in the front all up in your grille...I dunnow, maybe its just me lol...but the B/W definately is the way to go with that one...

Other than that, its perty dece
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hey, that's cheating, you can't have ppl judge you before submitting :P.
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hey, that's cheating, you can't have ppl judge you before submitting :P.


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Old 11-23-2009, 09:00 AM   #14 (permalink)
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probably... I don't care though
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