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Old 11-23-2009, 10:05 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Enter the Matrix

What you guys think?...was going for a matrix-esque look, low red throughout, emphasis on red for one item...



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Old 11-23-2009, 10:43 PM   #2 (permalink)
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looks good! i just wish she was more centered. id easy a little bit off the blur, too
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velcro some flashes to the back side of black things hanging from the ceiling to fire when she is walking by.


I like the concept. Subject needs more emphasis IMO.
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Old 11-23-2009, 11:58 PM   #4 (permalink)
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looks good! i just wish she was more centered. id easy a little bit off the blur, too
good suggestion, I'll try to ease off the blur a little..

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velcro some flashes to the back side of black things hanging from the ceiling to fire when she is walking by.


I like the concept. Subject needs more emphasis IMO.

would love to go back , wasnt planned @ all tho, was just chasing her down the hallway hahaha. we were trying to find our way out of the building and got lost

if I get a chance to go back there ill bring a flash with and see what I can do !
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Old 11-28-2009, 09:28 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Nice.

Not that it matters, but it looks like there was a considerable amount of post processing to get the image the way it's composed now...is that the case?

How did you take that picture?


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What you guys think?...was going for a matrix-esque look, low red throughout, emphasis on red for one item...



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Old 11-29-2009, 03:49 AM   #6 (permalink)
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it is composed pretty much exactly as shot, I just cropped in about 10% closer

as for processing, its really all raw adjustments (white balance, highlight/shadow color adjustment, contrast etc), and then in photoshop I added a tiny bit (tho arguably...I think I want a little less) of zoom blur to the outer 15% of the image or so, and used a brush to "highlight" the purse red, thats it

the lighting, the framing etc, pretty much just as shot, I was chasing down the hallway!
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Old 11-29-2009, 05:03 PM   #7 (permalink)
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I can see why you were following her and I doubt it had to do with getting out of the building.

Since it was a "grab shot" you're stuck with her being off center. This might be one where you go back and do a setup shot. Get a better looking woman next time.

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your effects look good, not sure if the shot is really matrix-esque but you at least accomplished it on the editing side.
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hahaha, she was pretty fantastic from the front too
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No stomp! I thought it was an insult. I was just defending the girl in the picture
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