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PhotoN00B
Join Date: Oct 2009
Posts: 7
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critique this one please
a friend of mine is doing a calendar with some of our cars. he like this shot and i think im done and its worthy the ringer from you guys now. please C&C the crap out of it, as this it the 1st thing that i will get published.
thanks in advance.
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PhotoLover
Join Date: Nov 2009
Location: Oakland Mi.
Shoots With: Canon
Flickr: Dane Van
Posts: 98
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the uneven crop on the sides kind of bothers me, that and the wall that isnt level. other than that my only complaint is that its an orange lambo. lol. nice shot though otherwise.
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PostWhoringMod
Join Date: Oct 2009
Location: From Chicago, missing Madison, WI
Shoots With: Canon
Flickr: AltOnePhoto
Posts: 964
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+1... crop looks a bit too tight and uneven. other than that, very nice. The wall is a bit distracting and it would so much cooler if it was just the sunset instead but a location is a location.
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PhotoFreak
Join Date: Nov 2009
Location: SoDak
Shoots With: Nikon/Canon/Pentax
Posts: 532
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yeah to bad about the crop on the first one. its a real winner. i really dig the second one too, i even thought that when i was looking through the turkey run thread. but i would crop out some of the bottom parking lot, or whatever it is. its to much and falls to much out of focus, draws my eye down and is really distracting. i love the low angle though
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PhotoN00B
Join Date: Nov 2009
Location: Hungary
Shoots With: Nikon D40 :( .. fell in love with a canon 40D
Flickr: http://www.flickr.com/photos/narancsphotos/
Posts: 25
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The 2nd one looks a lot better to me.
What focal lenght did you use on the 1st pic? Wide angle or that car is really that fat in the middle? :D
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