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PhotoFreak
Join Date: Nov 2009
Location: South Dakota
Shoots With: Nikon D90
Flickr: P/B RusherRacing
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Frost and Snow Please Critique
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![]() again B ![]() C ![]() D - Cheryl's (my wife) ![]() I didn't do any editing other than color and/or crop.. No brush/blemish removal etc. Please provide comments good and more importantly bad.. What would you remove blemish wise? Change color or tone etc... |
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PostWhoringMod
Join Date: Oct 2009
Location: From Chicago, missing Madison, WI
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Flickr: AltOnePhoto
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D is best IMO clear cut subject, good exposure and framed well.
B is good but it looks like the flash was a touch on the strong side, especially at the bottom of the frame. If you can crop it out it might end up being a neat looking pic. A could be better if you made the focus of the picture something more specific. Move closer to the pine tree and put it in the 1st or last 1/3rd of the frame just like D. C just looks like again the flash was a little too strong and its also a bit too specific, yet not specific enough. We can't tell anything else about the scene other than its branches of a tree. Now if it was an up close macro shot of 1 or two small arms of the branch and a bunch of out of focus ones (DOF) that woulda been cool but at this DOF and distance it just looks like clutter.
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Join Date: Oct 2009
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My eyes keep getting drawn to the light on the garage on the far right in the first picture. I think it is a distraction, and I'd probably either crop it out or use PS to remove it....
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